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Jumprope Jingle by ~Phraxus:iconPhraxus:



Huffing and puffing with all my might.
Blowing my belly up big and tight.
Stretching and swelling like a balloon.
Pressure's building, running out of room.
Inflating as big as I can go.
Body's creaking, gonna blow.
How many seconds until I burst?
1... 2... 3... 4...

BLAM!
©2008-2009 ~Phraxus
:iconphraxus:

Author's Comments

Since I've been having a lot of trouble find the time to write new stories and such, I thought I'd upload some of my older works from back when I first started exploring my fetish.

I wrote this little... thing about six or seven years ago while on winter vacation. I drew my inspiration from those old schoolyard jump-rope rhymes kids used to shout ad-nauseum back when I was in grade school. It seemed like a cute idea at the time. It's so short I wasn't sure if it was really worth uploading, but a few friends convinced me to give it a shot.

As with the other poem I uploaded, I considered editing this one to make it longer before putting it up here, but decided at the last minute to let it stand as-is. Again, it gives a bit of a glimpse into what my writing was like back in those days.

As always, comments and critiques are most welcome. Let me know what you think.

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:icondefilerzero:
Nice little poem, once again. ^_^
:iconwhitedeven:
Hehe like the way that really sounds.

--
Visualize the universe in a grain of sand.
:iconhiahia2323:
but not as cute as my cat buddy! he's on a picture in my gallery :)

P.S. i like to annoy people with the song, surfin' bird by putting it in a loop so it plays over, and over, and over again. :) :) :) :) :) :)
:iconnagi21:
Hey can I use this poem in a story of mine?
:iconphraxus:
What sort of story?
:iconnagi21:
An inflation story:D
:iconphraxus:
Alrighty then. Just wanted to make sure we were on the same page.:XD: People sure seem to like this piece for some reason. I'll be interested to see how you use it.:)

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